400 lives to match 400 deaths
Jinzu had 399 students
For his final student, only the most powerful would do..
If power was to be found, then one could do no wrong in heading to the fabled city of New Brooklyn. It was there that master Jinzu found his most gifted student.
In a city full of powerful children, No one knew exactly why Jinzu choose this child above all of the others..
But I knew why
The childs eyes were as dark as night..
Within him, burned a chi more powerful than the traveling master had ever encountered, save for Anteaous himself
This child, had no father, nor mother that he knew of..
Raised as a laborer, the dark child was no stranger to hard work and dedication to completion of a task..
This childs life mirrored Jinzus own, a life long since forgotten the day Jinzu first held a blade.
In the end, master Jinzu traveled from the far east, all the way to the west..
For one student..
For one kindred spirit..
For one of his own.
Master and would-be student..
Their eyes were the same, you see.
Jinzu had long hoped that he was not alone with his power..
That somehow, someway somewhere .Family, waited for him.
With the permission of the East King, the child was given to master Jinzu as his final student.
Let it be known that despite the available transport of the time, master Jinzu insisted on making the journey from east to west, on foot.
The trip back, was made the same way..
And it is said that the young child called Rah-Shaun complained not once.
After all, he was with family
AN ORPHAN, TAKEN CARE OF BY THE BROOKLYN KING, MASTER KELLY, HE WAS GIVEN TO JINZU AT A YOUNG AGE DUE TO HIS POTENTIAL.
LIKE MASTER JINZU, RAHS EYES ARE JET BLACK, AND ONLY SHOW A HINT OF HIS POWER AND LINEAGE.
LIKE MOST PEOPLE FROM NEW BROOKLYN, RAH HAS GREAT CONTROL OVER THE CHI THAT EMANATES FROM THE EARTH. SINCE THE CHI ENHANCES WHAT IS ALREADY IN THE SPIRIT, RAHS POWER TAKES THE FORM OF A DARK FLAME THAT COURSES THROUGH HIS BODY. HE ONLY USES HIS POWER SPARINGLY THOUGH, AS MOST TIMES IT IS TO ENHANCE HIS SWORD SKILL, BY ALLOWING THE DARK FLAME TO ENCOMPASS HIS BLADE; THE BASIC ATTACKS OF JINZU-KEN ARE ENHANCED.
JINZUS SPIRIT STILL COMMUNES WITH HIS LAST PUPIL AND IT IS ONLY NOW THAT RAH CAN FINALLY
CARRY OUT HIS MISSION TO TOPPLE DRAKUL AND SOMEHOW BRING LIGHT BACK TO THE LAND.
RAH IS OVER 130 YEARS OLD, BUT YOU WOULDNT KNOW IT. WHAT GIVES HIS AGE AWAY IS HIS WHITE HAIR AND HIS KNOWLEDGE OF THE OLD WAYS. HE IS EASY GOING, AND FAIR, WITH PATIENCE FOR DAYS, SO HE RARELY EVER LOSES HIS TEMPER. AT MOST, HE GETS ANNOYED.
DESPITE HIS LOW KEY DEMEANOR, HIS SKILL IS SECOND ONLY TO MASTER JINZU.
INDEED, HE CARRIES THE MANTLE OF MASTER JINZUS FINEST PUPIL.
HE HAS NO IDEA WHO HIS PARENTS ARE NOR DOES HE CARE. HOWEVER, HE WAS SADDENED TO HEAR OF THE DESTRUCTION OF NEW BROOKLYN, HIS HOME.
THE DEATH OF MASTER KELLY PARTICULARLY SADDENED HIM, THOUGH HE DOES NOT KNOW WHY.
MASTER JINZU IS NOT THE ONLY SPIRIT HE CAN COMMUNE WITH, IF ANY SPIRIT IS STRONG ENOUGH, HE CAN SEE IT.
WHETHER THIS IS OLD AGE OR A CHANGE IN THE AFTER LIFE, HE IS NOT SURE .
BUT COMPANY IS COMPANY.
RAH- DRAWN BY ...
CHARACTER/STORY CONCEPT..BY TEHRON FREEMAN
Has a bit of a star wars element goin on which is pretty cool... but is that a cybernetic arm.... if soooo why an arm... surely most of the cyburai had a cybernetic arm, why couldnt he have cybernetic legs... they would be awesome.
does he cook mean fish n chicken?
He has the shortest backstory and synopsis... guess u were going for the mystery behind the lead character again eh?
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Whoever fights monsters should see to it that in the process he doesn't become one himself - Friedrich Nietzsche
RAH IS NICE BUT ALL HIS BAD ASS STUFF IS FOR LATER..MAN WES WAIT TILL YOU GET A LOAD OF THE OTHER CHARACTERS BUT DEX HASNT DRAWN THEM YET CUZ I GOT HIM ON SOME QUICK TYR WORK, THEN HE'LL GO BACK TO THIS.. BUT TO PIQUE YOUR IMAGINATION, I CAN TOSS SOME NAMES OF THE CHARACTERS AT YOU...
TYTANE.
BLOOD RAVYN.
DARK RAVYN {BROTHERS}
MUNE. {PART OF A JAPANESE KATANA}
GHOST DRAGON.
ANTEAOUS. {WHO IS ACTUALLY ALREADY DRAWN AND HAS BEEN IN MY GALLERY FOR SOME TIME BUT I MAY GET DEX TO GIVE HIM THE TREATMENT. HE'S THE GUY WHO KUTTAH LOOKS A LOT LIKE. TATTOOS ARE DIFFERENT AND HE LOOKS MORE BESTIAL}
DAMU-THE BLOOD MONKEY.
THE DARK ARMY.
HELFORGE.
MASTER KELLY.
DAHKEDE"DA KID".
THE BLOOD ANGELS OF LA.
THE PORTULAND MONKS.
KORA-MIN {ONE OF MY FAVES! VERY CLASSIC}.
THE CYBURAI ORDER
JINZU-KEN.
ETC... SO YOU SEE, GOT MUCHO IN STORE BRO
THE CYBURAI DID HAVE DIFFERENT PARTS ENHANCED. MAN OF THEM HAD THEIR SWORD ARMS ENHANCED.. SOME DID HAVE THE LEGS.. ETC.. BUT THAT EMP FIELD.. FUCKED EM RIGHT UP
AS FOR RAH HAVING THE SHORT BACKSTORY, I JUST DONT WANT TO HARP ON THE GUY TOO MUCH ITS ONE OF THOSE THINGS WHERE HE HAS THE SKILLS, BUT ITS NOT POLITE TO BOAST ABOUT IT IN THIS CASE
AND YES, HE DOES COOK A MEAN FISH AND CHICKEN. THOUGH FISH IS HIS SPECIALTY. HE'S ACTUALLY KNOWN PRETTY WIDELY FOR IT..
SO MUCH SO, THAT HE COULD NOT POSSIBLY BE A CYBURAI
I MEAN HE COOKS FISH FOR GODS SAKE!
its called keeping cover..deep, deep cover
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"THIS ISNT "THE END", ITS NOT EVEN THE BEGINNING OF "THE END"...BUT IT IS THE END OF THE BEGINNING"- GROUCHO MARX.
I could throw names at you too... but i wouldnt do that... its like giving you an unopend pepsi can full of air when u actually want nothing more then the suger contained in that can of pepsi... that isnt really pepsi...
YEAH thanks for u know getting me excited and not being able to see anything for a few weeks....
Yeah ive seen atneous many times before lol
cybernetic parts are overated maaan, they have this incredible chi, if i had incredible chi i would levitate up and chop of some heads with my black sword of ownage... throw in some suplexs, some roundhouse kicks... maybe get my spare nan chaku out n whack a few... itll be all good.
But serioussly i think hed be better with cybernetic legs
however i like your names... tis intriuging hope to see more soon... Dex is always on form, so i know he'll hold up his end.
LOL
ya the man cooks fish... has a black cybernetic arm... a large amount of chi, great skills at stuffs... probably an ownage black sword of supah powah somewhere out back.... nope he cant possibly be one lol
i can coook mean stirfry NOW THATS deep cover man... fish isnt really that deep a cover... stirfry, no one expects the stirfry chef, and thats when it happens... BAM i creep up and solid snake them XD
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Whoever fights monsters should see to it that in the process he doesn't become one himself - Friedrich Nietzsche
SORRY ABOUT THE NAMES THEN MAN, I JUST THOUGHT YOU MIGHT LIKE TO HEAR THE UP AND COMING..AND SORT OF MAKE YOUR IMAGINATION COME UP WITH STUFF SO WHEN THE ACTUAL COMES, YOU SORT OF..I DUNNO..COMPARE
RAH? THE ARM IS THE ONLY GIVE AWAY, HOWEVER, THE GLOW IS EXAGGERRATED IN THE PIC. THAT SHIT IS A LOW DIM NORMALLY. HIS SWORD? STORED IN A NICE SAFE PLACE. NO NEED FOR IT RIGHT NOW.
AS JAMES EARL SAID IN CONAN..
WHAT IS A SWORD TO THE HAND THAT WIELDS IT!?!??!
THAT IS THE SECRET OF STEEL
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"THIS ISNT "THE END", ITS NOT EVEN THE BEGINNING OF "THE END"...BUT IT IS THE END OF THE BEGINNING"- GROUCHO MARX.
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Has a bit of a star wars element goin on which is pretty cool... but is that a cybernetic arm.... if soooo why an arm... surely most of the cyburai had a cybernetic arm, why couldnt he have cybernetic legs... they would be awesome.
does he cook mean fish n chicken?
He has the shortest backstory and synopsis... guess u were going for the mystery behind the lead character again eh?
--
Whoever fights monsters should see to it that in the process he doesn't become one himself - Friedrich Nietzsche
TYTANE.
BLOOD RAVYN.
DARK RAVYN {BROTHERS}
MUNE. {PART OF A JAPANESE KATANA}
GHOST DRAGON.
ANTEAOUS. {WHO IS ACTUALLY ALREADY DRAWN AND HAS BEEN IN MY GALLERY FOR SOME TIME
DAMU-THE BLOOD MONKEY.
THE DARK ARMY.
HELFORGE.
MASTER KELLY.
DAHKEDE"DA KID".
THE BLOOD ANGELS OF LA.
THE PORTULAND MONKS.
KORA-MIN {ONE OF MY FAVES! VERY CLASSIC}.
THE CYBURAI ORDER
JINZU-KEN.
ETC...
THE CYBURAI DID HAVE DIFFERENT PARTS ENHANCED. MAN OF THEM HAD THEIR SWORD ARMS ENHANCED.. SOME DID HAVE THE LEGS.. ETC.. BUT THAT EMP FIELD.. FUCKED EM RIGHT UP
AS FOR RAH HAVING THE SHORT BACKSTORY, I JUST DONT WANT TO HARP ON THE GUY TOO MUCH
AND YES, HE DOES COOK A MEAN FISH AND CHICKEN. THOUGH FISH IS HIS SPECIALTY. HE'S ACTUALLY KNOWN PRETTY WIDELY FOR IT..
SO MUCH SO, THAT HE COULD NOT POSSIBLY BE A CYBURAI
I MEAN HE COOKS FISH FOR GODS SAKE!
its called keeping cover..deep, deep cover
--
"THIS ISNT "THE END", ITS NOT EVEN THE BEGINNING OF "THE END"...BUT IT IS THE END OF THE BEGINNING"- GROUCHO MARX.
I could throw names at you too... but i wouldnt do that... its like giving you an unopend pepsi can full of air when u actually want nothing more then the suger contained in that can of pepsi... that isnt really pepsi...
YEAH thanks for u know getting me excited and not being able to see anything for a few weeks....
Yeah ive seen atneous many times before lol
cybernetic parts are overated maaan, they have this incredible chi, if i had incredible chi i would levitate up and chop of some heads with my black sword of ownage... throw in some suplexs, some roundhouse kicks... maybe get my spare nan chaku out n whack a few... itll be all good.
But serioussly i think hed be better with cybernetic legs
however i like your names... tis intriuging hope to see more soon... Dex is always on form, so i know he'll hold up his end.
LOL
ya the man cooks fish... has a black cybernetic arm... a large amount of chi, great skills at stuffs... probably an ownage black sword of supah powah somewhere out back.... nope he cant possibly be one lol
i can coook mean stirfry NOW THATS deep cover man... fish isnt really that deep a cover... stirfry, no one expects the stirfry chef, and thats when it happens... BAM i creep up and solid snake them XD
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Whoever fights monsters should see to it that in the process he doesn't become one himself - Friedrich Nietzsche
FUCKIN STIR FRY..
SORRY ABOUT THE NAMES THEN MAN, I JUST THOUGHT YOU MIGHT LIKE TO HEAR THE UP AND COMING..AND SORT OF MAKE YOUR IMAGINATION COME UP WITH STUFF SO WHEN THE ACTUAL COMES, YOU SORT OF..I DUNNO..COMPARE
RAH? THE ARM IS THE ONLY GIVE AWAY, HOWEVER, THE GLOW IS EXAGGERRATED IN THE PIC. THAT SHIT IS A LOW DIM NORMALLY. HIS SWORD? STORED IN A NICE SAFE PLACE. NO NEED FOR IT RIGHT NOW.
AS JAMES EARL SAID IN CONAN..
WHAT IS A SWORD TO THE HAND THAT WIELDS IT!?!??!
THAT IS THE SECRET OF STEEL
--
"THIS ISNT "THE END", ITS NOT EVEN THE BEGINNING OF "THE END"...BUT IT IS THE END OF THE BEGINNING"- GROUCHO MARX.
Conan... Hyboria was never the same... the entire book is freaking huge, ill probably tackle it someday
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Whoever fights monsters should see to it that in the process he doesn't become one himself - Friedrich Nietzsche
I TRY
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"THIS ISNT "THE END", ITS NOT EVEN THE BEGINNING OF "THE END"...BUT IT IS THE END OF THE BEGINNING"- GROUCHO MARX.
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